Here is what I have gotten as feedback. (review work file)
We need to follow the instructions and shape a paper-like example one. I have attached them both.
1-First, it needs to be converted to a single space.
2-The total length should be three pages so we need to add some.
3-Active voice is better than passive voice. We dont need to criticize that.
4-The papers general idea should be extended a little more, explaining what they have done and concluded briefly.
5-We do not need to worry about the papers format. APA line in minor comments should be deleted.
6-Line 442s comment does not make any sense. We need to delete that too.
7-Do not mean, be rather constructive as written in instructions. (this is in instructions).
8-We can use language like this part confuses me; you can add this citation from this paper, etc.
9-We also need to make comments on figures. (if you google the name of the paper, you will be able to find it)
10-We need to write SVG and PAI in parenthesis. Standing genetic variation (SVG), Population adaptive index (PAI)
11-You can change any comments that dont make any sense. There is a couple of them. 2-3, maybe.
